According to the paper from Michael Lesk, it shows the tremendous number of 12,000 petabytes. This is the number of the information on the internet in the world. Besides, around 40% of the world population has an internet connection today and most of the purpose for the internet was to search various kinds of information. As there are so much information exposed to people in the internet and it is available in everywhere in the world, it seems that people are relying on the information on the internet. But, there are some questions. How are you using those information? Are you using the information in a desirable way? Think about it. You must have some difficulties to use information in the internet and even be influenced in a bad way. To prevent some disasters, Information must be regulated in the internet.
- Attracts the audience - I displayed the paper from a professional that shows how much information has the internet with a tremendous number ,let people know how many people are using internet in nowadays, and show the major purpose of internet use. By displaying these facts, I could show that so many internet users in the world contact with so much information.
- Explains the topic. - By asking the question of 'are people using information well', I emphasized the necessity of discussion of the topic.
- Declares the thesis of your argument. - I wrote the direct argument , explaining the purpose of the discussion : " To prevent some disasters, Information must be regulated in the internet. "
References
http://www.lesk.com/mlesk/ksg97/ksg.html how much information
http://www.stat.si/eng/novica_prikazi.aspx?id=1907 purpose of internet use
http://www.internetlivestats.com/internet-users/ internet users in the world
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